@zelaughingqueen
hi!!! I read "the boy who didn't love" and loved it so much! I made book covers for it, and I was wondering where I could possibly send you it? You don't have to use it by any means, they were just really fun to make!!
@taketheavocado hey! thank you for reading, and thank you so much for taking the time and effort to make covers for me! i would love to see them; you can email me at mlima2269@gmail.com ❤️
Why do I need a boyfriend when I can get all the romance i need from Slow Suicide lol
WHERE’S FIXING ISABELLE
so there’s no hope for it to come back come on bro, just make me happy and repost it it was such a FIRE story.
@ahya4n i already responded to your past message!! i was editing it, and rewriting it, and ended up moving on indefinitely.
any russians or people that speak russian that are willing to help me translate something for a new story? please let me know here, and i will message you privately!
thank you <3
Hi Mary ! Words can’t describe how beautiful your writing is <3 I finished reading period and god it was the most heartbreaking yet the most beautiful story ever
Hi Mary!
Luca here. New on Wattpad. I just finished reading The boy who didn't love. It's pretty good I must say. I especially love the Brady. I think he's harmlessly humourous. Your choice of using third-person (omni-present) narration was very efficient in letting us into Marina & Brady's relationship (Their thoughts and well, attitude). Their relationship is very realistic of an employee-employer relationship in real life. So, Bravo on that part.
Now, for some constructive criticism. ( I won't be harsh.)
I like Alice, who seems to be the main character and not Sawyer as the title implies. I kinda feel like there were some missed opportunities you could've explored in the story. Like,
1) With your choice of narration, you could've let us know a little bit more about Sawyer as an individual and not from Ali's POV.
2) You could've explored Ali and her grandma's relationship, leading us to care for her so that when you take her away it not only hurts Ali but hurts us too as the audience.
3) The time jumps were really huge. I mean i get that the pace of the story is fast but the jump we exponential! So, sudden. Made it feel rushed, like you got tired of writing your own story down the way and couldn't wait to reach the end.
So, yeah that's my feedback. I'm a writer myself too but I'm yet to share any of my work as i'm still new. Hopefully, when I do, you will offer me the same courtesy. I will be checking out your other works as I do like your style of writing. It's uhm, well, different. Keep writing!
That makes sense. I understand that writers intentionally go about narrating their stories in a certain way for a reason. Also, sometimes we start something short but end up way too long and sometimes vice-versa. So, I completely understand.
I hope I didn't make you feel attacked. I always try to be polite.
@Lucalee27 hi, Luca! thanks for the feedback! as for the time jumps specifically, i totally get your point, but the story was meant to be short from the start -- meaning i had planned it on a specific timeline, and deviating from that would've just produced filler chapters. much of what you mentioned was indeed intentional, but i appreciate your viewpoint nonetheless. keep on writing as well!
Please answer me
Hey Mary! ,, I love your stories and u are the only author whose stories I ever read outside the fanfictions . The boy who didn't love is such a great story that I find myself to read it again and again plus your other stories too,hope you are doing well and enjoying everything with writing,,take care,,,, see ya,, bye-bye :)))
@MegaFolder hi! that is a great honor, thank you so much! take care of yourself as well ❤️
I love your story The boy who didn't love. It's one of the best I've read ❤️
I have a question can you put some of your other books on texttospeach I’m not the best reader cause I have dyslexia and texttospeach really does help but I understand if you can’t or if it messes up your books it’s just a question and all but I have read slow suicide and love with all my heart keep it up love you ❤️
@call1me1wolfie1 hi, unfortunately i do not have any control over that. i'm not sure how it works since it's a fairly newer addition to wattpad, but i can't add texttospeech myself as the author. i'm so sorry, i hope wattpad fixes that, and thank you for reading!